Lyrics....

[Gunk]

Ok... these are the lyrics to an as yet untitled song...
Please comment on them, and be as absolutely honest as u can be coz i really wanna no if they're good or crap...

First Verse:
Alone, no one thinks of me,
No one to love, just a razor blade.
My friend who lets the pain run out,
While I pour more down my throat.

Ur face reflected by the blades,
I see u in the running blood.
I hope this wound will never heal,
So the mind scars will not fade.

So I can never forgive u,
For what u made me do.

Chorus:
You gave me pain, which I returned,
I wasn’t thinking, I never do.
I wish I’d kept my mouth shut,
And that u had done the same.
I’m so sorry, but I wont say it again.

Second Verse:
Waste my life, searching for the end,
I’m turning from the one reason left.
My friend who has cold pain on tap,
Waiting for a time of thirst.

As the remedy consumes me,
I’m glad ur gone and out of sight.
The sorrow lights are out at last,
Now no one can call them back.

Coz i can never forgive u,
For what u made me do.

Chorus:
You gave me pain, which I returned,
I wasn’t thinking, I never do.
I wish I’d kept my mouth shut,
And that u had done the same.
U heard me before, I wont say it again.


So yeah, please be as ruthless as u like. I can take it... i think....