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Post by Use Me Holly on Nov 21, 2003 3:13:37 GMT -5
My head hits the pillow with 1000 thoughts. My mind is like a diary but much worse. Everything i planned to say now sits on my floor. A pile of crumbled paper from my book of thoughts. To have wasted my time with you makes me feel like shit When you declared us over my heart hit the deck. Six whole years of memories washed down the drain Please just let me hurt you, so you can feel my pain. CHORUS: Another failed romance, caused by me I'll try to stop trying, cos i cant succeed I've never failed at failing, i cant get it right I swear this is the last time, that i try. yeah , thats all i have come up with so far. i dont like rushing my songs so , yeh , it could be a while b4 i complete it .... what do u think?>  |
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oldschool
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Post by oldschool on Nov 21, 2003 4:00:04 GMT -5
i like it, i like it alot. ;D
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loserkid
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Post by loserkid on Nov 21, 2003 4:13:58 GMT -5
its aws! lurvvv it!!!!   |
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oldschool
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Post by oldschool on Nov 23, 2003 6:24:38 GMT -5
when are u gonna finish it , its awsome ya'll!!!
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Post by FACE OFF on Nov 23, 2003 6:57:00 GMT -5
i can relate.... its great. The way u put it into words is better than i ever could lol... good job!
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spankster
I'd rather not post here, although its great. Im too cool.
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Post by spankster on Nov 24, 2003 3:01:57 GMT -5
good job hopeless ;D
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Post by Use Me Holly on Nov 25, 2003 4:51:55 GMT -5
I think i'm better off here without you
When you were mine i was too concerned about truth
Stress levels on my heart were through the roof
When i failed to impress i thought i would loose you
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bridge:
i hate you for what you have done to me. I want to see you beg for me on your knees. I have to stop you , from hurting me. But i love you please say the same to me.
and thats it pplz!!!
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Post by RADisRAD on Nov 25, 2003 7:17:03 GMT -5
cool. i like it ! its really true, like how i would feel. its ........just cool man |
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Post by phatRedge on Nov 29, 2003 23:33:12 GMT -5
The first verse is great but the rest is just full of cliches and not very orginal. Im sorry but im just saying it how i see it.
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Post by HAPPY MEAL on Nov 30, 2003 6:30:33 GMT -5
The first verse is great but the rest is just full of cliches and not very orginal. Im sorry but im just saying it how i see it. cliche or not i like it..... not original....wtf??  |
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ginzo
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Post by ginzo on Dec 7, 2003 23:01:17 GMT -5
love ur songs hopeless...  |
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Post by nisarock on Jan 13, 2004 15:29:56 GMT -5
pretty rad song, i dug it hehe keep up the sik lyrics! peace. |
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Post by thesouls on Jan 18, 2004 9:56:27 GMT -5
do u have a tune to go with that yet?
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Post by Use Me Holly on Jan 20, 2004 4:54:31 GMT -5
yeop, id write up the tab for any guitarists who wanna know how its goes,. its prettty loud , kinda fast.
if this makes any sense to you it goes
my heeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad-(head is held for about 5 or 6 seconds) hits the pillow with (that bit is sung fast) two seconds of no singing. One . Thou-sand Thoughts. ,,.....i cant record it cos i dont have a mic...but yeh ... if that made a bit of sense.
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Post by JoE on Apr 13, 2004 5:04:00 GMT -5
i like the song... its kool.......
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